Hi, Denis! Recently you wrote in a message to All:
I did thaw a prime steak
The original version said
We'd done a bit of fussing [...] so it was agreed
we'd [...].
The first "we'd" is a contraction of "WE HAD" while the second is a contraction of "WE WOULD". In informal usage both are correct.
Native speakers use "did" as an auxiliary verb in questions... e.g. "Did you thaw the meat?" In declarative sentences, however, constructions of the sort you're attempting seem to be limited to dialectical usage.
Also, as he hirself pointed out, his finances are
such that I can buy any meat in the store pretty
much whenever we want it, which of course means
that special occasions are every day, a bit of
monotony as she wants steak after steak
While I understand your efforts to change the pronouns here to suit another individual, they need a bit of fine-tuning.
The original version said
Also, as she herself pointed out,
That's correct, but if one is referring to a male it's usual to say "HE HIMSELF". From what the author has said there's no doubt in my mind that Lilli is female. I reckon Andrew is male unless you indicate otherwise. :-)
her finances are such that we can buy any meat in
the store pretty much whenever we want it,
You got the gender change there...
which of course means that special occasions are every
day, a bit of monotony as she wants steak after steak,
... but you missed it here. By changing "we" to "I" in one part of the sentence but not another you also seem to be implying that you shop alone for groceries, even if your friend is paying for some or all of them.... :-)
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